A Dream..

• Artist: Ralph Lauren Polo
• Description: Why did I write this?
  To express what its like to lose a loved one..
  I know I literally didnt kill myself, or I wouldnt be here, but when you lose someone close... closer than family, a part of you dies, and this is a warning.
  Not a message, thank you for reading..
• Date: 10/09/2008
• Tags: death happiness grief dream poetry

O! How I dream of you, and the night's stars
Your so far away, im behind bars
O! Rescue me my mighty lady
For it is only your graciousness that will save me
Through the days and nights I think of you
All these silly thoughts, what should I do!
It is my love for you that keeps going
It is my love for you that keeps me hoping
Across the sky we will race
As our hearts beat we will keep pace
Forevermore there was grace
But when you died, you lost your life
And so did I with a sharp pointed knife...

Comments

[Jess love dogs]

I really do like your poem. maybe get more detailed. That might help , 4/5 stars

[Ralph Lauren Polo]

Im open for comments, i would really like some so I know what to improve on, thank you for your votes.
-Ralph