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I am running through the mist, not knowing nor caring where I end up.
I spread my arms wide to the coming wind, letting it surround me as I flee.
A bright light flashes around me, I emerge from it, surrounded by a wood, the moon shining brightly above.
I run through the leaves, they're whispering as I leave them behind.
I came to a clearing and spun in a circle, my eyes closed.
The world swirling around me, different images coming and going.
Flowers tickle my ankles, and the scent of fresh grass lifts my spirits high.
I am spinning, spinning, spinning.
I open my eyes to be surrounded by my dreamscape, the clouds high.
Critique it all you wish, I will welcome your comments so I can become better.
- by SeaTerrors |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/12/2008 |
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- Title: Dreamscape
- Artist: SeaTerrors
- Description: Just something I randomly wrote when I got bored.
- Date: 10/12/2008
- Tags: dreamscape
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Comments (4 Comments)
- cutiepie_9587 - 12/23/2008
- i like it. It's happy, and kind of magical. good job.
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- Himeko-14 - 10/25/2008
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that really good. I also love how ppl write about dream.
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- Divine Tragedy - 10/12/2008
- Nice, makes me feel happy.
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- SeaTerrors - 10/12/2008
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