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Weep not my angel
My angel from above
From above you came crashing
Came crashing from the sky
From the sky you fell, my angel
My angel wanting to die
To die would be a tragedy
A tragedy beyond compare
Beyond compare you are my angel
My angel lying there
Lying there your wings are broken
Are broken beyond repair
Beyond repair you think my angel
My angel in despair
In despair you are no longer
No longer will you cry
You cry too much for me my angel
My angel, please weep not
- Title: Angel
- Artist: HaIIows
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Description:
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first line sounds kinda like my entry 'Weep Not Willow' but other than that its totally different
*see more in my beta - Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: angel
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Comments (4 Comments)
- vaporwaver - 12/02/2013
- I enjoyed your poem, it was quite good, however, might I suggest some more usage of syntax? I feel more punctuation would help with emphasis where needed. Otherwise good job!
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- Kaleidoscope Rigby - 10/14/2008
- So deep and emotional. Amazing
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- bobodia10000 - 10/13/2008
- It's pretty good and well set up but i personally don't like the kind of poems with repetetive word usage. It just seems so simply done with less effort.
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- h O w L i N g W o L f Z - 10/13/2008
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Its really nice vote for me?
One Love For Two Birds ♥ - Report As Spam
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