Love is in the air~

• Artist: Lyke a b0ss
• Description: Its a poem. Although this was from the heart, it was not for a particular person ^w^
• Date: 10/16/2008
• Tags: love

Hold me like your own teddy bear.
Don't ever let me go, and treat me fair.
For my love is rare and hard to find.
A love that is so understanding and kind.

When I am near you I get this tickle in my heart.
Just promise me, we will never fall apart.
Your like a angel god has gifted me.
Upon these endless seas, and over the wisdom trees.

You are free to go, I won't hold you tight.
But, make sure you think it through and right.
You left footprints in my heart right from the start.
Now my heart has fallen to parts. heart

Comments

[MelTur]

Wow. This is very good. Most people think that guys don't know how to write poetry because they are too thick-headed to be that deep, but you aren't. I hope you keep on writing, and I would like to read more.
Good job. 5/5

[weirdisinsane]

very cute. =)

[life fiber]

: O
It would've been better if someone ACTUALLY said that to you in person!
That was very touching. ;O

[Alycia1284]

Wow thats toching

[Sapphire Kairi]

I loved that biggrin Good job!!

[Asian-Sweetie16]

loollz its so weird that u love to write love poems man =] but its cute too =P at least i kno my lil brother is "ROMANTIC!" lmao!! anywayz cutie check if they sell the cards at Canadian stores!! =.=' xD

~ur biggy annoying sisy =D ^_^

[P4ttycak3]

Ha 1st comment!!! If you ever make anymore please tell me!!! I like your poems. <3