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You took my body,
You controlled my mind,
You would hit me every time,
That I would just ‘step out of line’,
It wasn’t abuse, no it wasn’t a crime,
Everything I did was wrong,
But now I’m gone.
I never had enough,
I never even left,
But you did, but again found me,
You broke me,
You choked me,
Even made me bleed,
I wish you could look back and see,
How ******** up you made me,
Look at the monster you have made,
Now look I’m gone and I can’t be saved.
- Title: A Past To Remember
- Artist: Nyoko292
- Description: Just something I wrote a year or two ago.... critic if wanted.. I don't care, I like fixing things! =D
- Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: past
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Comments (6 Comments)
- chamorita69 - 10/20/2008
- hey did u experience this happenings dang girl sorry to hear that and i love what u wrote....men just sucks
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- Shinedown_grlie - 10/19/2008
- were u freaking abused or something!?
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- sezuko - 10/19/2008
- its so good how do you think of these things? nice smile
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- jessi911 - 10/19/2008
- g8!
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- lucifers_fallen - 10/19/2008
- That is amaziingg! I love itt smile
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- Koukaikutsuu - 10/19/2008
- whoa..........damn!!! that is good! did this happen 2 u? 5/5
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