I Bleed Black

• Artist: XxdeadxnxgonexX
• Description: Written based on a story I heard before... Where physical wounds bleed red while emotional wounds bleed black. There's a sequel poem to this that I'll try to get up. Title "Look Into the Mirror" I think it's rather good, but then again, I don't. >.> Tell me what you think!
  
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• Date: 10/19/2008
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True strength comes from within
True friendship never ends
True love never dies
Just like the stars twinkle in the skies
Even though you’re always there
Growling or smiling and ruffling my hair
I find myself always wishing for
The unexpected times you showed up at my door
You were the very first friend I found
You showed me how to live life all around
Our days together seem to dwindle fast
So let’s live each moment as though it’s our last
And when I’m gone and not coming back
Remember that I will always bleed black
Yes you heard me right
As I whisper to the night
I bleed black
Not from the red that I lack
But rather because I am who I am
Rather because I find that I can
I bleed black
My vulpine smile was only an act
To everyone else – I seemed to be happy
But you know the truth: you know the real me
So as I leave like a silent cat
Always remember – I bleed black

Comments

[Cat of Ice]

realy intresting and kindof true

[Leslie2691]

Man, U r great!!!!!

[Ms Make Me Smile]

beatiful again,i loved the way the last line was written beatiful.and the way you explained that there may not be much time left but that it is good the time you do have left.the thing i would say is that the rythm is unusual and the bleed black line is only in the last half of the poem other than that it was great.it is a very deep and emotional poem a bit emo but great