My Best Friend

• Artist: Dark_Clark17
• Description: I wrote this peom for my best friend as u see, and well yea its how i feel :p
• Date: 10/23/2008
• Tags: best friend

Your My Best Friend
you surely make my heart bend
You sit and listen to me as i cry
While i stop to think and try
When everything seems frail
You come to save the day
As my heart is lost in a stray

My friend that i care so fondly of
Is certainly the person that i cant stop thinking of
As my life slowly fades away
You always come and make me stay
As your words leave your mouth
They surely pierce my heart
It feels like a flying dart

My life revolves around your words
That sing to me as musical cords
Your words slowly touch
As i can feel this rush
That make's my heart Blush
If i could say how i feel
I would say how our love is real

As i close my eyes and wonder
and i fall into a deep slumber
I feel you next to me
whispering to me
how much You care
wondering myself if i should dare
My heart pounding for you
As I tell you I Love You

Comments

[Gothic Yaoi Supporter]

Horribe -.- more amateur ish really... Stop writing all together. 1/5

[sai888]

wow its good to know im not the only 1 who thinks this way about thier best friend. unfortunatly my best friend doesnt know i like her and she and her boyfried are madly in love

[-xo--Ali--ox-]

*adds poem link to siggie* ur welcome! well done xD
btw merry xmas/ quanza/ hanuka ~! n a happy new year too ^^

[Heartless_WolfSpirit]

wow this poem realy got me! it reminds me of something i once knew! i love this poem! hope you guys stay together forever! and never let your friendship end! :]

[Purin-chii]

awwwz cute and simple ^_^
I like simple things a lot hehe :3
I hope you stay friends for a long time :]

[Dark_Clark17]

Thats kinda how it was, but we kinda arent talkin to each other at the moment for, complications in our friendship i guess =[

[Augee]

Really nice! They sound more like lovers, which is nice because it shows that even if they are lovers, they're best freinds too. smile