What Comes After...

• Artist: Syra_Anna_Belle
• Description: A poem I wrote after my boyfriend broke up with me, then began to out right ignore me, after promising that we'd still me friends (his words not mine)... so I wrote this.. all my friends really like the emotion in it, and I hope you will to....
• Date: 10/26/2008
• Tags: what comes after heart break

I can’t imagine,

I couldn’t pretend

That we’d ever be friends again.

It’s more awkward,

The wounds still fresh,

My heart is put to the test.

My mind screams,

My spirit dies,

I can’t keep living...

Loveless lies.

Please take this love,

And put it out,

Before I’m filled

With so much doubt

That I can’t function,

That I can’t lie.

I guess I’m not the girl,

You’ll love until you die.



I wish and wish,

And wish some more,

That I could say,

"I hate you more!"

But how could I say,

I hate you at all,

When you’ve caught me more times

Than I could fall.

And dealing with clumsy me,

You’d almost think there’d be a fee.

Well I was right,

And I’ve paid you twice,

I just hope that

Broken hearts and

Shattered souls...

Will suffice.

Comments

[kylie3497]

u should change "will sufice" in to "will not sacrifice"

[SUNTEKE]

I love the heart put into this poem

[Syra_Anna_Belle]

Thanks all of you! Your comments and votes mean a lot to me!

[Jekista]

I have had to deal with the exact thing before and i know what it feels like ...love it ...not the feelings ..the poem

[Harlequin_Ana]

this is so awesome,i cant relate to it cus my ex boyfriend was never there for me,but i have a lot of mixed emotions for this poem,its really beautiful.really good job ^.^

[hahime-chan]

Nice. I felt your pain through the poem. I may never have had a boyfriend, but I think I now have some idea as to how painful a breakup can be. Good job, sweetie ^-^