Love is but a memory

• Artist: Sexy_goth88
• Description: Something that i wrote when i was bored
• Date: 10/29/2008
• Tags: love memory

I look at you
Your fading fast
I look into the sunset
and wish midnight not to pass
Your eyes so dark and deep
Your love so strong but weak
Your the person i knew to be the strongest
I thought you to be around the longest
I watch you breaking away, Laying in my arm's
I cry before they sound off the alarms
Lights so bright everyone so fast
No one could save you from what it was at last
I see now as you lay so peaceful that
Love is but a memory in the heart of two lovers

Comments

[XxDaRk_W0LFxX]

one more spelling errors at the last second sentence the "peacful" suppose to be "peaceful" i can understand you tho you were probably kind of typing fast or in a rush but anys GOOD poem ^.^ , even better than mines =_=

[Lil Mitsurugi]

Very heart touching. I love it.
But there is one spelling error, in the second to last line.
I think you meant to say "now" but you put "know".