All my Might

• Artist: atsyrk
• Description: love and hardship
• Date: 11/01/2008
• Tags: might

CHORUS:I really like him, with all of my might
if i woulda had him, i woulda held on tight
my best friend asked him if he liked me
he said no, as a friend only
i told her it was ok
but inside i didnt feel that way
i like him so much and i see him everyday at school
now my heart is broken, and i feel like a fool

when i look into his eyes
they are no longer starry skies
i still like him with my whole heart
even though he doesnt like me, its still a start

CHORUS

hes cute smart funny and kind
i want him to be all mine
i think about him every day
i like him, and wish he'd feel the same way
i smile at him and he doesnt see
all the lovely thoughts inside of me

i like him with all my might
i hope i can get this love thing right
maybe, just maybe someday
he'll finally feel the same way
i guess i will be alright
i wont let him go without a fight

Comments

[Stone^_^Rose]

OMG! You actually used an apostrophe! Only one of them, but it's better than none (though you also really need one on "won't" because "wont" is a completely different word). This song is probably something nearly everyone can relate to. It's a common story told in a simple manner with decent rhyming. I would say that this doesn't flow, but it's much harder to tell with lyrics than it is with poems. Lyrics and songs are so different, you can't tell if it's going to be good until it's put to music

[Empress Of Cheese]

I went through the ssame thing in the eigth grade. I was crushed but then I found a new crush. whee

[Gothic Mainiac]

That made me sad, but in a good way.

[Alaya Bone]

u r amazing!!!

[NiNaBaBaY]

LOVE IT!!!

[Joonbong]

You should be a songwriter.