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i heard about your suicide attempt, how you felt un useful. and empty inside, your sister had found you with the rope and chair about to cross the line that can never go back on. To this day your still alive, but have that sorrow buryed deep in your heart. But you wont let it go. Even though i wasent there, i want you to know that im here now. and will always be here. your my close friend, my best friends brother. my friend. and my brother in God, that will never die, fade, or go away. it will last forever.
And you told me about your past though I will not speak of it. your regrets affected your life, that is clear to see. you said in the clear picture, but I couldent fit it together. But i know now what it was all about, and your sorry. though it would seem that you dont see the light yet. I want to help you find the light in this barren world filled with sorrow, and ill be here to help you in any way i can. open your clenched heart, and please tell me whats wrong.
to both of you together, your sorrowful. and wish to get in the future, and leave the past behind. ive learned that not all scars and regrets can heal quickly. i know how it feels, so dont lock me out, let me in. and allow me to help nurse your wounds. as the best friend you both deserve. I want to show you the joy that being in the Lord brings, so stop hiding in this darkness. and come to the light, that can save you. the light that will forever love you. it always has.
- by Toxic_Pinup_ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/04/2008 |
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- Title: My good friends
- Artist: Toxic_Pinup_
- Description: its about two very close freinds of mine. so please leave a comment respecting their lives please. and there still alive for anyone misunderstanding that.
- Date: 11/04/2008
- Tags: good friends
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Comments (7 Comments)
- 1Akuri - 06/19/2009
- sweet and emotion
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- brotherhood459 - 12/20/2008
- its really deep and has alot of emotion >< =) 5/5
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- Toxic_Pinup_ - 11/04/2008
- thanks for your concern and time, and info on were i need improvement, but just to say there still alive. and at lease one is still my friend. im not sure bou the other...
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- xXPaint It In BlackXx - 11/04/2008
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yu cn almost picture it....
im sorry for your loss.
it's reall good...very deep - Report As Spam
- miki1303 - 11/04/2008
- also, you overused punctuation, And did not start sentances with correct grammar. such as saying something, putting a period, then starting the next sentance with and, which is a joining word.
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- miki1303 - 11/04/2008
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i like it, its very good, but its more like a story.
also, spell checking before hand would be nice, because you spelled "your" as ur and used "u" instead of "you" plus there was "wasent" instead of "wasn't"
so yeah, try to double check it before you put it up. I can understand one or two errors like that, but that many is just slightly rediculious. - Report As Spam
- Loralai Aya - 11/04/2008
- My condolances for your loss, it is hard to lose a friend let alone two. Be glad they no longer suffer.
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