Will you?

• Artist: princess i kill cookies
• Description: this is a poem i wrote
  please tell me what you think
  yes, i was sad when i wrote it
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: will care

If you are with me
i cannot see you
if you hold me
i cannot feel you
your kiss
i cannot taste
your words
i cannot hear
this is a cold road
traveled alone
even when near
i feel far from home
the people dispise me
i am a misfit
nobody wants me
nobody needs me
nobody cares
nobody can spare
a bit of love
or a simple complament
too busy tied up
in material things
gameboys
and things of the like
are more important
than caring
i travel this dirt road
all alone
all alone
all alone
i know i will die soon
but will they care?
no they will not
for i am a drop in the ocean
nobody cares
and now i am dead

Comments

[yuni wulf -- Alpha Angel]

Is sad, do you relly feel this way? I hope not, is not right for someone to feel alone, to feel unloved. you shud read the poem I entered, its the first one I ever entered in the arena (since I didnt know about the arena for writers until yesterday), its called LIFE (Love Is For Everyone)