Angel of Death

• Artist: dieingflame
• Description: ok y'all should know my style by now, this one is a tad dark, but instead of seeing it as that, see it as a pleasant way of describing the passing of a mortal term of existence.
  
  again i do hope you all enjoy. oh and on a side note, please excuse any typos i dont fix, my fingers are a tad stupid at times, but i do try, simply let me know in a comment or a pm and i will try to edit it, if possible, thank you ^.^
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: angel death

He comes when you are in doubt. He comes when you are bleeding. He comes when you are fading.

A lone Figure comes to take you away and deliver you to a world that is unseen by those that breathe....

He arrives as your body turns lifeless and cold. He arrives as your consciousness falls into the void.

A lone figure comes to take you away to a world unseen by those that still walk this earth...

He departs with you in his arms, he takes you away to the world unseen by those whose hearts still beat....

Your body lies there motionless and pale. Remembrance of your actions well as this lone angel of death takes you to the judgment for all of life's end.

"May you live long and well in this deathly realm." The angel lets out in a cool yet loving voice, as he delivers you to your world in life's hence.

Comments

[Angry gothicbabe]

i love it it is so dark it make me read it more and more

[_P.-D.-A._]

I like it. I think it is a perfect way to express what happens when you die.

[Ac1dBlaze]

This is awesome, and the more comments thing, its better isn't it, I wish i put up my angel of death poem

[BannedAccount00300028096]

its good and the Angel of Death rules!

[xXxkissing rosesxXx]

coolio! its amazing!

[dieingflame]

sweet that is what i like to see comments i hate just a rating..i prefer comments more ^,^

[the vampire listat]

i really like it