Going Down

• Artist: Seiryo-san
• Description: A Concrete poem I had to write for my english class
• Date: 11/10/2008
• Tags: going down

I climbed to the
Top of a very high
Building and stared
Down at the world
It was mine to hold
From where I sat atop my throne many
Miles above them I reached out
To grasp the sky, falling for-
Ward I remembered
I can’t
Fly

Comments

[Hyrule_Ninja 45]

Awesome....rockin....great poem! 5/5!

[akemi_chan48]

I really love the formatting of your words...the arrow is pretty kool
but i don't think that the phrasing works well with it...i still like ur poem though! ^_^

[Wizeria]

Awesome poem~!