Guardian Angel

• Artist: Loralai Aya
• Description: I was trying to fall asleep one night and this poem kept running through my had. I couldn't sleep untill I wrote it down. where it came from is a mystery to me. its more of a letter than a poem i guess, but it really touched me.
• Date: 11/21/2008
• Tags: guardian angel

Did you see me today?
I saw you.
The golden sun in your hair,
the rosey blush off your cheeks.

I hear your heart crying,
though you didn't see me,
I was there,
crying in tune with you.

I watched you gaze through the window.
Adoring the figurines of angels.
I smiled when you bought one,
you didn't notice me then either.

You may never se me,
or hear my whispers in your ear.
I understand your busy.
Life is too short to stop for me.

Still I'll stay with you,
'till time has had its end.
I'll smile when you smile and cry when you cry,
an I'll watch over you with every breath.

You may never notice me,
and even though I don't have wings as white as snow,
or a halo of sparkling gold.
If you let me...

I will always be your guardian angel.

Comments

[angel_ninja]

amazing overworkedandunderpaid ur wrong it doesnt need work stop critizing the way its writen and enjoy it for what it is nothing and no one is perfect so dont expect their art to be. its beautiful as is the meaning behind it so instead of trying to make it to be what you think it should be look at it as something from the heart not to be judged or perfected but read and understood. Its a pitty when someone can read something so beautiful and only see the flaws in grammer and rhythm. 5/5

[Kay-dragon94]

wow, that's really cool. when i try to write poems, they don't come to me until i start writting. ^^ 5/5 excellent job!!!!!

[Overworkedandunderpaid]

Very good idea behind it but you need to work on your wording, rhythm and I would try rhyming it. If it doesn't work out so what, but I'd try it in traditional verse. I think it could be improved... 2/5