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A girl sat on the edge,
she felt left out and sad,
But she makes a pledge
and said, "I'll make a friend."
The girl looked and looked
to find friends to meet,
But she only found a book,
which she decided to read.
Each page was blank,
like a cloud in the sky,
Until one page,
caught her eye.
It said one word,
giving shivers down her spine,
Which made the book fall,
landing on the ground.
But still, it gave the girl shivers,
like the cold days of winter.
She looked down at the book,
with a frightened face,
Reading that word,
made her heart quicken its pace.
"Nothing..."
- by MariaRubyS |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/24/2008 |
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- Title: The Nothing
- Artist: MariaRubyS
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- Date: 11/24/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Mugentsuki - 01/15/2010
- I want that book.
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- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 02/08/2009
- it potrays and caches the sens of solitary and the rythum is perfect 5/5
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- AkaruiRain - 01/31/2009
- nice. I really liked the rhymes! biggrin
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- Pikku Prinssi - 11/28/2008
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The concept is good, and there was even rhyming that made it flow better in the beginning, but at the end when the reader finds out the word that made her freak out, "nothing,"just seems out of place and just random. Does she think that's what she is? Does she think that nothing will fill her desire for friends?
But, overall, it's good. Maybe not Shakespeare, but good. - Report As Spam