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when your happy your eyes are amber like the reflection of a campfire on the ocean waves crashing as they come up shore
when your sad your eyes turn blue your gaze at me
so warm and loveable
you look up at the sunset and it seems like your eyes turn it amber like the fire on that warm summer night
your love from me is no different than my love for you
we see each other
i feel your warm gaze and fall into a deep love state
when you leave me i feel like crying becuase i feel i miss you when your gone and cant wait to see you again
our bond is un-breakable
our love is unchangable
our life and how we changed after we met was too good to even ddream of
i love you
you love me
we love each other
you might not believe it but i love you more than anything i could ever wish for no, you are what i wish for
i dream about you when your not with me
i wish that i could be with you everyday and everynight
staring into those amber eyes amber eyes
hoping just wishing so hard that you never leave me
wishing i could say "i love you"
and hear your soft girl voice say "i love you too"
i wish we could grow old together and see each other all the time
to die with you and to see you in heaven
that is my life wish for me to love you and for you to love me
my love for you is something real
i wish you could see that
my heart beats for only you
the love of my life
my soul mate
my best friend
some say they will promise to stay with you and grow old with you but i vow upon my life i will stay and love you till death
you are mine
i am yours
when i look into those amber eyes i see my reflection and my forever growing love for you
in those amber eyes i feel like i loose myself
your amber eyes
- Title: amber eyes
- Artist: chioryo
- Description: i finished it! (made it up on the spot the whole poem this was the wrong one that i had to resite! ) srry its a little long ><
- Date: 11/24/2008
- Tags: amber eyes
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Comments (5 Comments)
- chioryo - 12/02/2008
- eh... i made it up on the spot what do you expect....? it to be a perfect thing? guess again ><
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- iBrightScales - 12/02/2008
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This poem is nice, but it could be much better. It's kind of a run-on.
It needs breaks, stanzas, things like that.
Try revising it and posting it again: I think you could do much more with something like this. - Report As Spam
- chioryo - 12/02/2008
- i know ima nerd >< leave me alone homeslice >< its not my fault your jealous of my awesome poetic skills xD jk lol
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- Hebigure - 11/25/2008
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Awwww....
Your such a nerd... razz
Nice poem! - Report As Spam
- angel_of_bloodlust - 11/24/2008
- very good. I love your descriptions and the emotions you convey
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