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The emotion that has began wars that destroyed countrys
The emotion that has caused the downfall of many great men and women alike
The emotion that holds no bounds to whom it controls
The emotion that now has me ensnared within its grasp
The emotion that has chosen the one who treats me the most ill
Love.
- by Takai-Jisatsu |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/25/2008 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: Takai-Jisatsu
- Description: I have been writing poetry for a while and I thought I might aswell throw one of them up here
- Date: 11/25/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Takai-Jisatsu - 11/27/2008
- Helen of troy big guy
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- 1copywrite1 - 11/27/2008
- Good, but the first "The emotion" doesn't make sense, and the correct word for that is money. I might be overlooking it though. 3/5
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- TheresaGoeSRawR - 11/27/2008
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wow...amazing!
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- Takai-Jisatsu - 11/26/2008
- Nice analogy, I loved this person for a year and everybody kept telling me she was using me and being horribly mean to me, and now I see what they meant, but there is also history to this because i am not the 1st person this has happened to, its happened to the best of us
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- ii-Sinful_Dreamer-ii - 11/26/2008
- i like ur poem.....i see how love is and it can just engulf u in and let u express the emotions u wish to feel and just leaves u blind and u also learn the dark side of it no matter how painful...well thats how i see it srry if u disagree
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