Unatainable Love

• Artist: BaTe0o7
• Description: This is for those sorry losers that never stop trying to impress that one girl who will never say yes..... but keep trying anyway.
  
  
  like me. XD
  Good Luck Losers
• Date: 11/25/2008
• Tags: unatainable love

I love you so much when i close my eyes,
Your the one I dream about.
But the more of my love I give to you,
The more you leave me without.

And no matter how hard I try to forget,
You are always in my mind.
But the faster I run to you my love,
The farther you leave me behind.

For whatever I do to prove to you,
How much you mean to me.
Seems to vanish in air whenever your there,
And your never able to see.

Comments

[Senkita]

Excellent
Good use of rhythm and rhymn
Felt it was cut a bit short but... On the whole, very good^^

[Viet Dollie]

i feel the same way.

[Angeladr7]

aww, that's so sad. It's a good poem. The tittle really does describe the poem.

[HestiaMoon29]

Heart it!!^_-
Definately paints a picture
Hey don't worry you'll find someone who loves you equally or more. Trust me ^_-

[DanAmy]

i like it it sends out a sad message and thats how i like peomes i luvvv portery ver goodd
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