Some People

• Artist: USETHISACCOUNT483
• Description: well i wrote this on september 25th, 08, i hope u enjoy ^^
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: some people

Some people scream,
Some people cry.
Some people live,
Some people die.

Some people care,
Some people feel.
Some people can quite,
And some people can deal.

Some people don't know what's right,
Some people don't know what's wrong.
Some people dont know,
Some people don't dare.

Some people don't understand,
Some people dont relize.

Just because i smile doesn't mean i'm happy.

Comments

[bindyblueeyes]

i quite agree with your last line
but you need some work
you have maybe half of the peom rhyming if not less
so you should sort that out. and in a line you say
"some people can quite
and some people can deal."
i think you meant quit instead of quite

but other than those small imperfections it really is quite good
so ... 4/5

and would you please comment and rate on one or more of my work?

[MezzoMesiah]

some people suck, nuf said...1/5