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why would u want to
why would u need to
break the demon in side of me
THE DEMON INSIDE OF ME
I FEELS LIKE ITS KILLING ME
SOMEONE HELP ME PLZ
WHO CURSED MY SOUL I CANT NOW HOW
to break the demon in side of me
o oo oo oooo ooohelp me plzzzz
befour its to late
dont wait
break the demon inside of me
help me plz
- by zero_shadowbringer |
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- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: demon inside of me
- Artist: zero_shadowbringer
- Description: i made this a long time ago
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: demon inside
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Comments (3 Comments)
- rayjustin - 11/29/2008
- well there's really serveral grammar mistake and so as spelling i'll giv you a max 4. Try improving your grammer and double check it and I'll giv you a 5 XD. Keep it up
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- zero_shadowbringer - 11/27/2008
- i know
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- Kimono325 - 11/27/2008
- Well, I guess it'd be okay, but the grammar isn't very good. I get what you're getting at, and the idea is good. But... it isn't well written and there are several grammar mistakes. Sorry!
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