Forbidden Love

• Artist: parkerAlice
• Description: Just a poem about love. Not my best I don't think, tell me your ideals, be truthful :D thanks.
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: forbidden love

You and me;
We're just another forbidden fantasy;
Everytime I close my eyes;
Everytime you tell me lies;
It seems like everyday is the last day ever;
Knowing that our love is not forever;
When we live in a world where babies being born is the start of a new beginning;
And death means the end of something very special;
We used to be friends;
But now the fun starts to end;
Cause it's time to give up;
What we were;
Is what we used to be;
Now is now;
So you should know that I think we should break-up;
Cause we should just give up;
Cause you know that we didn't work out... together;
Cause some love is not forever.

Comments

[The mistake demon child]

i love the poetry; it has lost of emotion! I can relate im having boyfriend problems too!

[Flippa_Got_Swaag]

EEEEP! I JUST LOVE IT! 5/5 ^_^

[bob756]

this is good 5/5

[Felicia_Monsterr]

This poem is really good. i can feel what you feel. but one thing you might not have realized when writing this poem is that, just because things didn't work out, doesn't mean people should break-up it just means that if they really care about each other and love each other, even if the love is not forever you should at least try to make it last while you can. but it's still REALLY good. good rhymes, good grammer, and a good feeling to send to readers

[Aqua_Ursus]

nice!!! i really like it

[SakuraIchigoRyu]

Very nice, sad. Try to make it flow a little more. About halfway through it gets a little choppy. Maybe even make it longer. But it definitely gets the feeling across.

[dreamweaver33]

wow cool i like it.