New moon.

• Artist: Toxiic Muffin
• Description: Yeah, This Poem was inspired by the Twilight series, Book two : New Moon. I actually cried when I read this book and It inspired me to write a poem. My friends and family thought it was good, So I thought I would share it to see what you thought.
  
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• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: moon twilight poem

You said you loved me, But it didn't make sense.
You walked away with out another word said.
My knees began to shake and my eyes began to swell,
When I realized this was our farewell.

You let me be, Alone and free,
Because you thought it would be the right thing for me.
I refused the truth but ate up the lie,
When you were telling me goodbye.

When you came back, You healed my heart,
And told me you loved me and we could have a fresh start.
You wanted to know why I ate up the lie,
"It's because it never made sense for you to love me."
And I began to cry.

But you were back and nothing else mattered,
Your cold arms were around me and my heart was no longer shattered.
The tears are gone and now I can see,
I love you, And you love me.

Comments

[Toxiic Muffin]

That`s cool. Thanks for the nice comments, Everyone.

[Dolphin0150]

I love this poem and im making a story with me in it called After Breaking Dawn and my engish teacher wants me to finish it soooo badly

[randomkiro]

aaaaaawwwwwwwwww!
it's beautiful!
it makes me wanna cry!
i cried a smidge when i read the book!
it was truly touching! >,< (i put both these comments on dif avis! lolz!)

[sabriwolf17]

aaaaaawwwwwwwwww!
it's beautiful!
it makes me wanna cry!
i cried a smidge when i read the book!
it was truly touching! >,<

[Edward-Bella-NessieCullen]

That is so beutiful and dont worry I cried too. I am now writing a poem about all the books so I will put that up soon. The only thing I think you should add is something about bella still being sensitive about him leaving at all now. Otherwise it is still great and a great insperation. Thank you for sharing this with the world. 5/5! I just finnished breaking dawn and I cried so be prepared if you didn't read it yet. Thnx and once again 5/5. PM me if you want to talk about the series.

[iiEm0 Dork]

Amazing!
You cried too?
I cried when i read that part when he left her and some other parts too! =[

[kadodge14]

I Love TWILIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nice poem too.
It sounds like something Stephanie Myer would write.
I give it my rare
4/5