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Striken with fear, and silently sobbing
I cant see you my dear. for my emotions are bobbing
Red liquid flowes down my hand
as I clutch the roses thorn band
It pierces the skin so slowly in vain
But I still await to feel the pain
Im sorry my love,
Im no longer youre dove
I have lived through so much violence,
Leave me alone,
In my moment of silence
- by Hug-able Fox Bear |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: Moment of Silence
- Artist: Hug-able Fox Bear
- Description: Eh, I dont know... I felt creative but I wanted to write something dark and kinda... emo.. ANYWAY here it is.
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: moment silence
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Comments (6 Comments)
- NakedJack - 12/26/2008
- Don't listen to this milky eyed minds. They stroke your ego and to this level they bind. Know that your writing is good, your emotion strong and story bold, but so much deeper could it be told. Simple words of advice; good art is easy to enjoy but hard to understand.
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- Haiwee-bui - 11/30/2008
- wow. simply amzing
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- emo0213 - 11/29/2008
- cool
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- Meganlovesyou14 - 11/29/2008
- i think its very good...its nice to know someone out there in the world shares similar feeling with me...
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- Hug-able Fox Bear - 11/28/2008
- xD thank you thank you! *bows*
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- Rook219 - 11/28/2008
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wow... very... wow...
Noticed it on my feeds. - Report As Spam
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