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a day like no other..
a day that seemed like anyother..
and yet here i stand...in my own funeral..
some say it´s just a dream of mine
a dream in my mind..
but i know that is not true..
how did this come to hapend to me..
when i was so happy and filled with joy..
i never thought i would not enjoy..
all i ever wanted was to be with you..
i gave my all but aperantlly..to you..
my dearest my lips wheren´t enough..
you thought you had it tough..
now look am gone..
this should´ve never been done..
you and i are just not ment..
a river of lies was sent..
now ,now that i seen you with the other..
i now see this day like no other..
farwell..my dear..my love..
a day of our togetherness forever is now better to me..
now it is my funeral ..
as the bells ring teling me it´s time..
i only look at you wiht such ..
detest and i smile to see this day.
like no other today..
i can say to you..
i do..see you in the other side..
- Title: A day without a soul..
- Artist: yakumo21
- Description: This is just a small free versed poem I did this is my 1st of anything that I have posted on gaia..so I hope you like it ^-^
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: without soul
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Comments (4 Comments)
- BelladonnaValo - 12/07/2008
- Cool, I guess. Theropy mmaybe needed but that was good. I liked it, a bit dark but good.
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- yakumo21 - 12/03/2008
- thank you everyone^^
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- Chris Redfield RE-05 - 12/03/2008
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Yeah,great job yakumo^^
It's a very nice poem!
I also like it much! XD - Report As Spam
- Liz-z MCRmy - 11/29/2008
- I really like it
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