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I stare out the window of a world so bright
With bright green grass and doves taking flight.
And there standing in all white
Is a young teenaged girl,
With eyes as blue as aqua
and shiny blonde curls.
Crimson leaks down her arm and down her hand,
And the pale white figure continues to stand.
Her expression is pained, fearless but scared.
She doesn't fear the creatures of the night,
But the darkness thats within,
She is committing suicide,
The worst possible sin.
I stare out the window,
Of this new dark and lonely world.
And there standing in all black,
Is a young teenaged girl,
Her eyes as dark as charcoal,
Flowing black curls,
Lips as red as a rose,
And skin as pale as snow.
She doesn't fear the the darkness within,
But the creatures of the night.
I stop looking at the girl who's standing in front of me,
Because the more I look I see,
That un dead teenaged girl. . .
All along was me.
- by Toxiic Muffin |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: The ghost of me
- Artist: Toxiic Muffin
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- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: ghost
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Comments (7 Comments)
- BattleStarPicketFence - 06/24/2009
- A decent idea and paralellism makes it stand out. But the description is not terribly original, and probably cramped by your rhyming. But I'll give you a four for effort and having an actual structure.
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- Wicker Chair - 01/04/2009
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I've grown less and less fond of "emo poems" over the past several minutes in this arena
however it's strange and mysterious enough to earn my favor
also, the parallelism between the two girls is quite enjoyable
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- Kat leya ii - 12/08/2008
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wow...
lov it! smile - Report As Spam
- Toxiic Muffin - 12/07/2008
- XD I'll be sure to add that next time. Lawl.
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- Zombie Warfare - 12/05/2008
- needs more zombies blood and gore.
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- Pandora831 - 12/02/2008
- omg touching!!!!!
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- Til Death and Beyond - 12/02/2008
- awesome 5/5
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