tears

• Artist: celestialvampiredarkness
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• Date: 11/29/2008
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falling tears and shattered faces
remind me of dark and rainy places
they hold my mind twisted in pain
ignoring them just goes in vain
i cant sit by and let them fall
so i stretch out my hand to catch them all
i try to comfort and soothe your heart
but all my efforts just fall apart
wait a second. these tears that i see
seem to be coming not from you but from me........

Comments

[gangsta_me06]

i like it.!!! hmm.. broken ... like me..

[celestialvampiredarkness]

that poem was written when i was thinking about breaking up with my gf. but i dont want to break up with her and then i thawt she wuld break up with me instead. it was a complicated process of "i do, but i don't"

[NebuChi3]

It's so serene and yet, sad.
It's one thing that I DO get, and another that I don't. stare

[MaiKoneko]

beautiful, simply beautiful, elegant and sad... I love it 5/5

[Defy Me]

very well thought of.
but i think the words seem a little forced and they rhyme a little too much
but its a very nice.