Invisible

• Artist: Sesskogaru
• Description: I do not provide descriptions about my poems.
  I firmly believe that descriptions remove substance from a poem.
  I am, however, interested in what you have to say about what my poem is trying to say.
  
  Feel free to comment if you like. ;)
  
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: invisible

Invisible
I wish I could be invisible,
So nobody can see me.
I wish I could be invisible,
As invisible can be.
I wish I could be invisible,
Because the world doesn’t need me.

Comments

[Petals on the Breeze]

I think it's a rather pretty poem, but seems so easily done.
Still, 3/5.