A Thousand Teardrops

• Artist: Petals on the Breeze
• Description: I made this a while ago in a mock competition. It's my favourite poem so far.
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: thousand teardrops rain

A thousand teardrops,
Raining down.
The dark night sky
is your crown.
Falling, pattering, gently humming,
upon my windows you come drumming.

Comments

[Pretty Little Muffin]

I like it : ) 5/5

[angel of goddesses]

i like it. its sweet.

[Sapphire 3278]

I really like this. It's short, sweet, and to the point - everything a good poem should possess. While I usually do not enjoy rhyming poems because they come off as forced, your words just float down the page effortlessly. Fantastic job!