Betrayal

• Artist: SneakyDeath
• Description: A poem describing how it feels to be betrayed by a loved one.
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: betrayal hatred traitor

Why did you do this to me?
Did you loathe me
This much to hurt me?
Now I am lying on the ground
Bleeding to death
And you are staring at me
With the most hateful eyes
That I ever seen
Why are you not helping me?
Do you enjoy seeing me suffer?
My life is slipping rapidly
And all you can do is
Stare at me with the coldest eyes
That is above the eyes of a serious killer,
Why are you turning your back on me?
Are you planning on leaving me for death?
I am seeing you walking out the door,
And not even calling the ambulance to assist me,
With my last breath,
I let out a word,
"Traitor"
And die.

Comments

[Zuhukanah]

Similar to the things I write about in my songs, very nice. 5/5
You should check out my songs when you get a chance

[fanggirl31]

I love it but it could blend together more.

[~Shadey Sam~]

I like it, very nice. could be a bit more moving, but you may have wanted it to sound just like this so its your work if you like it thats what matters. yup traitors suck.

[Lilith Imperious]

Do you even KNOW what it feels like? How could you try to describe that which you don't fully understand? Poetry is the expression of emotions you've felt before. You can't create a good poem without truly understanding what you're writing about.

[iRawr purple dinosaurs]

wow...