Trapped?

• Artist: Thunaer-Lemniscate
• Description: A poem speaking of how I felt after a breakup. Multiple people were after my heart when I felt devoid from being dumped by the person I had thought loved me. Call if bad if you want but I think we all feel this way at least once.
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: trapped devoid love empty fear

You want my love when I have none?
You want my touch when I can't feel?
You want my kiss, something even I miss?

Why do you want what I don't have?
It is driving me mad!
I had thought my mind was clear,
yet here I sit filled with an odd fear...
Why do I feel this way, I was free but now contained!
My life fulfilled but now I am empty...
Why do you all do this to me?
Not one, or two, but three!

Comments

[Mira Tayia Rose]

I like it. It doesn't flow perfectly, but it conveys the emotions well, and I think that's really important. 4/5