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He sees her only for her pretty face,
He sees me only for disgrace.
I am not his sister, but his lover.
Why am i fated to never love another?
His face, his smile, his jokes.
He makes me laugh, he makes me cry.
But, he simply can't tell me why.
- by RainingMusicDawn |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/04/2008 |
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Comments (2 Comments)
- BAMA_BABE202 - 12/30/2008
- I REALLY like that one
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- Nikki4815 - 12/26/2008
- it's...okay. Maybe it could be better if it flowed better. And, also, you have to keep your audience in mind. The majority of gaia is teenagers, so appearance is what matters to a lot of us. Yes, some of us look at the content, but they stay interested if it looks good. which is why the emocotions HAVE to go. it draws away attention. And maybe change the color and size so it looks a but more appealing. But it's nice enough. 4/5. Rate back? Check out my gallery.
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