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When we first met you seemed so kind,
but now that I know you i feel so blind.
You left me for someone overthere,
and kept me wondering did you even care??
I know life goes on and that I'll be fine too,
but I always wonder was it worth it for you??
- Title: First Impression
- Artist: nksnoopy
- Description: This is an intresting and unique poem, it's not as good as my others, BUT I THINK IT'S OK!
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: first impression
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Emilie_Aututmn - 07/30/2009
- It's a rhyme pattern... If you're a poet you should know this....
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- nksnoopy - 05/09/2009
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wat does AABB mean?
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- NarakunoHana-FlowerofHell - 04/13/2009
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I don't like how it's
AABB =.= - Report As Spam
- Akamia09 - 02/28/2009
- It IS OK!! COOL!
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