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Blood rushing,
tears falling,
heart breaking,
soul crushing,
he's leaving,
she's crying,
he's happy,
she's dying
she's running,
he's walking,
shes shouting,
he's talking,
she stops.
He goes.
Gone forever?
No-one knows...
- by Phailography |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: The exit.
- Artist: Phailography
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Description:
This is a poem about a girl who loves a guy, but he's leaving and she thinks that she will never see him again.
Based loosely on true events.
The rhymes are placed in random places. i made it like this so it is more unique. - Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: heartbreak love emotears
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Comments (7 Comments)
- mrsdeadhead - 01/30/2009
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aw. 2 thumbs up. soo cute..its simple, to the point, yet keeps u on your feet.
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- fanyank - 12/21/2008
- sad good 5stars
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- AmaniPhoebe - 12/07/2008
- its like a short tragic story. what happens next?
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- TercesX - 12/06/2008
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Aww... That reminds me of so many things...
Great job. 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Jimmi89 - 12/06/2008
- Aw. That's good. I almost cried too. sad
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- xXItsChucklesXx - 12/05/2008
- Wow. Very dramatic
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- Phailography - 12/05/2008
- aww ): ty ^^
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