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when you see a shooting star
you dont see what
you see from there
you see a person
flying through space
with no purpose
except for
granting people's wishes
on earth
but when one of these people smash into earth
they either transform
into a star-dusty rock
or die
but to me, a shooting star is
still alive
she sparkles with
beautiful specks of light
and her life is different than ours
and she's the love of my life
- by AJ_Bored4Lyfe |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: shootings stars
- Artist: AJ_Bored4Lyfe
- Description: about shooting starz!
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: shootings stars
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Comments (3 Comments)
- mychocolatesparkle - 12/06/2008
- I love the free verse. It's amazing that you told a story and still managed to let it flow. I loved it. I hope the love of your life is happy!
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- Curbside_Cyanide - 12/05/2008
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This is a good free verse and I think it is intresting
Telling a story that I've never thought of before
4/5
You should check out my entry: Ghetto Trade - Report As Spam
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