Life's illusions

• Artist: lynnexo
• Description: This Poem is About a girl, her boyfriend broke up with her, She can't believe it. It was too sudden. They were having fun... and he told her that it was over... Well The Poem's about me... but i like talking in the third sense... =[
  
  Rules: Please Don't Flame, Only GOOD Criticism. Rate My Poem with Caution, I already accidentatly posted it in the writing fiction section, I am now Re posting it here, Thanks.
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: lifes illusions

Can't believe you'd do this to me
Won't believe you did this to me
My heart's shattered, my hands bleed
I can't think of anything but you and me

I think I'm going to finally cry
I just can't keep it all inside
My friends don't talk to me anymore
I can't handle this no more.

Life's Illusions
Broken Hearts
Can't remember Us anymore

Life's Illusions
Broken Hearts
Can't remember Us anymore

Wiping these tears away
Hoping I’ll be okay
You've hurt me on the inside and out
I can't believe this, your going to make me shout ?

Life's Illusions
Broken Hearts
Can't remember Us anymore

Life's Illusions
Holding back,
Can't remember Us anymore

Comments

[beautifullychaotic11]

One of the best poems i've read so far.