the one i can't see

• Artist: ichi_zeno_kongo
• Description: i was sad and need to let it go
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: cant

i get up in the morning to find no one there.
i look all around and all i can see is the dark.
i turn on the light and see you there.
i am happy now that i can see you.

Comments

[Nikki4815]

short and to the point. I like it. 4/5. Rate back? My best entry is called "Unspoken Message" and I recently submitted "Lost in the World"

[monochrome max]

awesome poem. real sweet.