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I wonder if I could say this.
Late last night, I dreamt of you, and I suddenly remembered.
October, that was the month that I first met you.
Violin music once again reaches my ear.
Effortless, you let your feelings flow out of you through music.
You are my best friend, my comfort, my everything.
Once again, I ended up crying when I see you with her.
Unconsciously I fell in love..
- by Rayns Fyre |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: A hidden message?
- Artist: Rayns Fyre
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Description:
Can you find a message inside the message?
Er.. I just typed this up because I was bored.
If you didn't get it, then blame my writing skills.
[[I don't usually write poetry..]] - Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: hidden message
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ZGMF-X31S-Abyss - 12/08/2008
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omgomg i cant believe u submitted this xD xD
u noe wht im gna give u??? lol - Report As Spam
- drake107_mk - 12/08/2008
- i think everyone gets it, don't worry your writing skills are perfect, favorite part was "unconsciously i fell in love" that is what i call beautiful language.... i'm guessing it means she didn't know that she was falling in love....
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- diitcher - 12/06/2008
- LIES. I know you are in love smile
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- vanjoy - 12/06/2008
- and overall the poem is ermm.....
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- vanjoy - 12/06/2008
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omg!!!
hahaha
cant believe you submitted
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- multirage jr - 12/06/2008
- i think its good! 5/5
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