Stolen ♥

• Artist: Pomegrandeur
• Description: My heart has secretly been stolen away from someone else and given to another. This was inspired by the kiss that changed me...
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: stolen heart love slave want

Someone's snuck into my heart,
Someone I fear will tear apart,
These pieces of so very fine,
of this ice cold heart of mine,

I find him more than just tempting,
It's left me here, alone, lamenting,
the awful way I can't resist,
the awful way that you insist,

That I'm yours, all of me,
For no one else, and I agree,
There's not a thing I wouldn't do,
For you, my love, oh yes, it's true,

You stole my heart, it's beat and all,
It pounds for you and makes me fall,
You haunt my dreams for heaven's sake,
from those I wish to never wake,

For in my dreams I am your slave,
A secret taken to the grave,
I give myself to you completely,
Although, only, quite discreetly,

How you feel, I do not know,
but, for you, my feelings grow,
if you want me, take me now,
belive me love, I don't care how...

Copyrighted. <3

Comments

[Mario the Davidic Hero]

that was very decisively magnificent! keep it coming with some good works of yours! smile

[Echonance]

That was Pretty awesome. It had a good clean flow, and each rhyme sounded like you meant it. Good work, keep it coming.

[Camila Espia]

I like how it gives a glance of the grimdark side of falling in love.

[AmaniPhoebe]

ITS AWSOME! i feel where ur coming from. i have a friend i'v liked since 7 grade but i never tried to acknowledge those feelings b/c i didn't know if he liked me back. but know i know and am a little afraid of those feelings. only b/c i dont want to get hurt anymore. i'm rambling on now, its really awsome. i can feel the stolen heart. i love it

[RainyDayMonster]

secret kiss? i feel a juicy story coming along