Are you there

• Artist: iiyummii
• Description: wanted: someone to love
  
  
  
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: there

looking for someone
to love
to hold
looking for someone
to be there when im cold
want to find you
and hold you close
your the one that
ill love most
havent found you
but when i do
i will be so true to you
i will be yours
you will be mine
falling in love
till the end of time..

Comments

[wiccanmother_zoey]

dear, this is a wonderful piece. the emotion is very clearly felt, and it sounds quite sincere. be sure to keep any emotion strong when you write poetry. Poetry is emotion, any emotion, and that is what kills most young poets. they loose that emotional fire. Keep writing dear! Keep those dreams and emotions alive!!

[iiyummii]

I HAVE ALOT THAT I CAN PUT ON HERE, I just want to make sure people dont make mean comments before i put myself out there!