Love

• Artist: Gracie Jane
• Description: ok yea i know this might b the corny-est poem u hav ever read but i was bored. this is my first time writing so plz dont b harsh when commenting.
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: love

Love starts with a smile
Then it builds to more
Love lasts for a while
Then walks out your door

Love is a curse
It overpowers us all
Love shows no remorse
It surrounds us like walls

Love is like a book
There always is an end
Love makes us look
For it may come again

Comments

[Nikki4815]

I LOVE IT!!! This is my style of poems, by the way. Sorry, but I don't really like when there are a lot of verses with just two lines. I'm more of a free verse person, like this poem. I love it! *favorites* *becomes a fan* *gives you a 5/5* *scowls* why doesn't gaia let you go higher?

[BoomPrideBoom]

This is a great poem. Only tiny prob was "walls" or I don't know, your poem is too good for that one mistake.