One more time!

• Artist: ShootingStarrySky
• Description: This is a song I wrote out of happiness to have me and my old friend back as friend again, if that makes sense, and out of regret for being mean. I deddicate this to GaaraandHakugairl!
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: friends appology

With darkness swirling 'round my heart
It knows that it once played its part
But now I push it back
Wash out all the black
Start at the beginning once again
Replay it over 'til the end
Hoping this time I'll pull through
Though I'm still not sure what to do

Once again,
'Til the end,
I'll be by your side!
Looking up,
To the sky,
I feel so alive!
I'm put back into my routine,
I hope it's not a lie.
So I'll do this one more time.

I once found a true friend in you
Then I went through the pain of losing you
I feel so bad for what I've done
What have I become?
I expected you to look down on me
I wanted you to hate me
I wish that I could take it back
I won't do that again

Once again,
'Til the end,
I'll be by your side!
Looking up,
To the sky,
I feel so alive!
I'm put back into my routine
I hope it's no a lie.
So I'll do this one more time.

I've found out who I am isn't all it's cracked up to be.
The person I pretend to be,
They're not real at all!

Once again,
'Til the end,
I'll be by your side!
Looking up,
To the sky,
I feel so alive!
I'm put back into my routine
I hope it's no a lie.
So I'll do this one more time.

Comments

[sweet little mouse]

I am certain as a song with music and such I would appreciate this a lot more, as it is a very sweet song and contains a subject that many people write about and can relate to. I guess without music or a melody, it just seems a little overdone. (The topic, I mean.) I gave it a 4/5, only because there were some plain parts where word choice could be spiced up a bit! biggrin

[NakedJack]

Its funny how you can tell if a man or woman wrote the poem you are reading before you bother checking. Always the same thing, rewrote a million times, is there anything else on these women's minds?

[Toxic Tears of Winter]

i love it!!! reminds me of me how i said i would never like some one again but that failed.......miserably.

[HeartScribblez]

This is Awesome! So heartfelt and wonderful. 5/5!

Please read and comment my song "Paper Dolls"? It's also a song I wrote dedicated to a friend, but, we'll never make up. It's over.