Silence

• Artist: Sexi Mama Tasi
• Description: love poetry
  its a tanka poem
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: silence

as the sun sets
and the hill tops sit
relaxing as dawn comes near
with nothing to fear
night is all silent and calm

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

first line is four syllables when its to be 5. and a tanka is 5-7-5-7-7...so u need one more line