Love is

• Artist: the_toxic_shockartist
• Description: I'm sorry I'm tired of all the crappy poems about "what love is" from 13 year olds that probably don't really know so here I go (first discription I've ever written for a poem,that's how fed up I am)
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: loveis

Love is

Love is the way you accidently spilled your cranberry juice on me and I didn't care
love is the way you pretended to be bad a** just to impress me

love is when you found out that I kissed him and you didn't leave
love is when after all the the lies i told you still bleaved me

love is how you looked at me like I couldn't do anything wrong
love is how you smiled at me when I accidently shredded your science fair project

love is all the whens,hows and ways I messed up and you still thought I was the most amazing girl in the world

wow love is mesed up

Comments

[saraaleece]

None of those things represent what I think love is.. =/ but i will give you a 4/5 anyway.

[Belle Corvus]

The meaning of the poem is well written, but grammatically, it could use some work. Try adding more punctuatiuon in, to make it sound the way you read it, when you read it aloud, otherwise, people may find a different meaning than you intended. Good luck! Keep writing. (Ignore the rude critisims, look for the constructive ones) 4/5! rate me?

[Zombie Warfare]

ummm no i dont like this poem at all very straight forward without many poetic devices. 2 at a best but im giving you a 1,

[jojs_97]

i love this poem it's funny and cute!!