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Remembrance
the recall of memories
the so called "God"'s gift
to punish those for sins
but with nothing but one
to regret
what do i dream of
*"What I've felt
What I've known
Never shine through in what I've shown
Never free, Never me
So I dub thee unforgiven"*
I am unforgiven
born from sin
destined to Hell
eternity
a want for better things
of love renewed
compassion
forgiveness
but i shall remain a demon
and i've let it
build inside me
my unforgiven memories
- by Raven Rae Knight |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Unforgiven Memories
- Artist: Raven Rae Knight
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Description:
Current mood: rebellious
"To my baby brother, my bubby. To his unforgiven memories . With love from his big sister. From her unforgiven memories. I dedicate this to you, Zach."
I wrote this one night while I was thinking of my papaw. My Bubby and I miss him very much, and though this has nothing to do with his death, it is still a memory.
*Reference to the song "The Unforgiven" by Metallica
**Reference Image drawn by Scheme88 as a commission for me - Date: 12/12/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Flippa_Got_Swaag - 12/19/2008
- I love it! Great job. 5/5 fan, fave.
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- Raven Rae Knight - 12/12/2008
- I do not believe in one "god" or another. If offend someone over "god" being in quotations they need to grow up i think. it's the way it is to avoid controversy. B/c not everyone worships' the same "god"
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- Mischiefwulf - 12/12/2008
- its pretty good but i think the part that says the so called "gods" gift will offend some people. otherwise i sorta liked it
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- Raven Rae Knight - 12/12/2008
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rate me nice....and no rude comments!
FIRST! lmao! - Report As Spam