Friends?

• Artist: Greater Millenko
• Description: just another poem i wrote while bored.
  please comment.
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: friends bored ocean blank life

Seas of loneliness rise like a brutal swell.

My life is harsh like a cold desert.

I think it's all good and well.

People see me as strong and don't realize that I too can hurt.

When I lie awake in the night I only think.

As the worlds spins would it miss me in the end?

I don't understand why life's so blank.

Is it true?Are you my friend?

Comments

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

Everything is presented blantantly, there is no meaning that has to be looked for, makes it boring. 1/5

[Namida Himitsu]

Oh wow, what a deep meaning inside this.
It makes you have the need to go back and re-read everything and think about every line.
5/5 defiantly.

[psycho special bunny]

i already kinda commented on this... lol...