What happens when we Die?

• Artist: Shinigami Picola
• Description: This poem is what happens after 10 seconds of boredom....
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: deathpoem

What happens when we die?
Oh, please tell me so.
What happens when we die?
I really want to know.

Does the body lay there, sleeping forever,
Or does the soul reincarnate?
Will it go to heaven or hell,
Or be loss in the sea?

Will we turn into invisible ghosts,
Or gaurdian angels?
Will we be the Earth,
Or turn into nothingness?

What happens when we die?
I really want to know.
What happens when we die?
Oh, please tell me so.

Comments

[C u p ii C a k e e s]

good poem
yeaa i wonder wat happens when we die lol XD

[Miku4U]

You have a typo in line 4 stanza 1. I see you based this poem on the various versions of what the world says happens when we die. In it's simplicity it contains the beauty of knowledge, sandwiched between repetitiveness. It's beautiful. 10 seconds huh, most interesting! 3nodding 5/5