Deep sorrow..

• Artist: -x-Muted-x-Melodii-x-
• Description: I wrote this in my health class instead of writing notes..
  Enjoy..
  This may be me in the story, you try and guess.
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: deep sorrow

Tearstained face, cloudy eyes, hateful thoughts, the little girl in the dark room, cuddling herself, crying. She feels unloved, a nusiance, someone that is just taking up space, and it would do everyone a favor if she just disapeared or better yet, died. The darkness slowly consumes her soul, devouring her body as the tears fade as well as the faint cries of death dissolve into the misty air..

Comments

[Dire_kala]

very good, 5* from me...i know too well the toils of humanity. never forget the pain of the past, it helps us grow to what we are to become. Just dont let it over come you....again great job

[Mista Gummyz]

STORY STOryyyyy :d

[Muted Ocean]

aww Luna, the poem is good and sad >_<
hope it isnt real D;

[Xx_heartbroken29_xX]

another good one
im proud of u
keep up da good work okie