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hands always moving forward
never stop for rest
can't go back
can't be suppress
will be last
was here first
through existence
will always traverse
- Title: TIME
- Artist: AzTeC650
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Description:
something i made up fast
comments to make better THANK U - Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: time
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Comments (2 Comments)
- an_t_social8 - 03/06/2009
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umm... don't you mean, 'can't be suppressed'?
anyway its ok. You can tell that you rushed it though. When you make poems you should take a couple of days, reciting the lines, adding more, stuff like that. Anyway, 3/5 - Report As Spam
- Afgplaya - 12/16/2008
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Like it...
i know u made it quick... but take time when your writing poems and stuff 4/5 - Report As Spam
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