The Final Hour

• Artist: Hunter Athenas
• Description: Well lt's see how it goes... if its good im a poet and if not let see if Im an artist...... like a song goes.....
  
  Never walk away from a fight that's worth fighting
  Never hesitate when you know you're gonna act
  Never waste your words on a fool you won't listen
  Never sell your soul cause you'll never buy it... back
  
  
  - from endeverafter , No more words
• Date: 12/16/2008
• Tags: final

As you look around for the very last time,
You start to wonder what a life you truly had.
From the day you were born,
To the very first steps you ever took,
To the first words you ever spoke.

Then comes the time of your first day of school,
To the moment you step into that stage and receive your diploma.
You will remember all the times you had in that place,
All you wonderful friends you ever made.
To the first kiss you ever made,
To the day of your marriage, oh what a happy day
Then comes the time of your first child,
And all the wonderful things he ever did.

Then you will spend all the time with him everyday.
Like his first little league win,
To day of his marvelous play.
Then comes the time were you retire,
You will walk slower and your hair disappears little by little,
You will get more tired, and start to fall asleep every time.
Then you know you are getting old.

Now here we are to the final hour
All your family is here with you
All the wonderful memories you ever made
Now close your eyes as you take that final breathe
While you’re very life had gone away.


by jose granados ( IMS )

Comments

[meroko88]

hi, my friend you are good writire than me so go for it.

[Lightkarakuri]

WOOOOHOO GO JOSE~ poetry? joo? never kneew nyahahahahaaa~ good job~ dont listen to bad comments there just jealous peoples~

[Hot Willy101]

no one wants to hear these depressing songs about dying which you aren't very good at writing, the language is simple and the theme is cliche